Saturday, August 25, 2012

Unthinkable


More than what I thought,
A perfect vision to my soul...

Words that made the atmosphere change:
to crush me to the ground
or let me soar up, rising with the wind

A perfect vision 
that uncovers my soul
and brakes me down,
crumbles my determination
and throws me beyond my wildest dreams

Unthinkable.


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  1. Whoa. That last stanza was intense! Throws me beyond my wildest dreams... that's vivid and bursting with browns, reds, and yellows!!
    It's like the mind is being unpredictble but it's also possibly words having an unexpected effect. Or both...

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    1. colors! I like that! I´m glad it made you think of colors.

      It´s both, I think, it has to be both.

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